Re: [tlug] Re: Post my article on tlug.jp?

[Nguyen Vu Hung <vu-hung@example.com>]

Josh Glover さんは書きました:
> On 26/07/07, Nguyen Vu Hung <vu-hung@example.com> wrote:
>
> > - You need a title, abstract and a conlucsion.
>
> Well, it is not an academic paper. He has a title and a conclusion.
With a title and a abstract, the readers will know what
they are going to read.

I just don't want to read 10 A4 pages and finally found that
the article is all about what I already know.
> > - Shorten the story of your GF as a study case and Hyundai example.
> >
> > If I were you, I will cut 70% of text.
> > Just think of if one should have time to read 10 A4 pages - I don't.
>
> Dave seems to be happy with the length, and it took me 15 minutes to
> read it, which I did not think was unreasonable. I guess a non-native
> speaker of English might take twice as long, but 30 minutes is still
> doable; print it out and read it on the train. :)
Like Dave said, it is a trade off between brevity and readability.
The point is that if the article long, the readers will be hard to
find out what the author wants to say.