Re: [Lingo] Draft reading ...

[Godwin Stewart <gstewart@example.com>]

On Fri, 24 Aug 2007 14:08:37 +0900, Nguyen Vu Hung
<vu-hung@example.com> wrote:

> Can anyone spell check/review this anouncement for me?
> 
> {snip}
>
> the Ubuntu community, as well as the open source community writ large,
> to participate in this important global event.”

Surely, "the open source community *at* large", no?

> In Vietnam, software freedom day resonates even more strongly, given
> that massive copyright infringement, computer security problems, and the
> need to improve the country’s IT skill level makes the choice of Free
> software an obvious one.

Make, not makes. The subject is plural (massive copyright infringement
etc...)

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